I am certainly not telling you what to write or when it, but perhaps your piece might have been more persuasive or credible if written after the trial was completed.

Apologies for not reading your piece more thoroughly, most writers are grateful for someone at least perusing their writing rather than not reading it all. That said, your clarifications do not change my view that your hypothesis was unsupported - because it was based on incomplete testimony.

Done here, thanks for you piece and response.

Loves a good conversation